Collis529's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sexy Lois]

Your version of Lois Griffen looks really good. You did a good job on her butt and breast. I love the curly hair of hers. Although I long hair would suit her better in my opinion. Great work.

[French Maid in Pink]

I like the way you position her hip to show off some of her curves. For maid outfits were you looking at the french kind or the ones in Hentai? It doesn't look bad I am just wondering is all. I feel you can make this even sexier if you covered up a little more of her to leave some thought to the imagination.

[JIM MELON LEGION OWNS BLASTOISENETWORKYT]

I like the tattoo on her thigh and her tribal look. The tattoo reminds me of samurai jacks art style which fits this piece nicely. Seeing her full body either fighting or doing an pose balancing would be awesome to see. By the way you have a good style.

lockebelmont responds:

Thanks alot my friend. Most of the credit goes to the creator, he's the guy behind the design, i'm just happy to have it come out as nicely as i wanted it too. Cheers and thank you!

[Princess Mononoke Fanart]

This isn't bad it is good. It is not great because the way her waist is she looks like she it could be tilted forward a little more. Also her hair looks like it is falling more than being pulled back by the air hitting her face. Despite my criticism and the fact you have just started up again. I like what you did with the blur to show she is in motion. Overall I like it.

[Mega Charizard X]

What could makes this better would be the epic battle between mewtwo and mega charizard. You could have mewtwo shoot a shadow ball like a kamehameha, and have Mega Charizard shoot his flame out like a solar beam. It would be epic still nice drawing.

[Aya Nguyen]

Not bad you could add atmosphere that gives off more of a desert look. You could blur the background more overall I like the piece.

[Little Mech]

This reminds me of League of Legends a little blitzcranks futuristic skin. Were you going with an Iron Giant kind of painting?

[Smoke Break]

This one reminds me of blade runner the movie, and a little bit of tron. What was some of your source material that you used to make this one?

YakovlevArt responds:

:) you're spot on there!

[Harp]

I like how you have the harp part of her body like she is wearing cloth and as a whole it looks a little like a wood carving. You can see what I mean by looking near her head.

[the Undead Soul Eater]

I understand it would turn the painting into something different but, I would like to see what you can do with a full body shot while still implementing the fly anatomy. Also how come you decided not to do the multi plated eyes?

Dahlia-K responds:

yeah that would change the approach I was aiming towards, but it's a good suggestion.
and I didn't want to go with the thousand eyes idea because I thought that it would be too direct. I tried to make it more human like with her eyes having the simple honeycomb pattern. maybe she was a human who transformed into an undead by a Beelzebub :p